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18:2418:24, 27 March 2013 diff hist +4 John James Audubon →Early ornithological career: minor grammar change
18:2218:22, 27 March 2013 diff hist −105 John James Audubon →Starting out in business: removed redundant sentence in favor of referenced sentence already in place. No substantive change, we just had something double-stated.
18:1418:14, 27 March 2013 diff hist −4 John James Audubon →Emigration to the United States: minor grammar change.
18:1018:10, 27 March 2013 diff hist −21 John James Audubon →Early life: minor edit to clarify reference to Audubon's father. Substituted "he" (the antecedent being the father") for a reference to the father which was less clear (whether father/grandfather).

16:5516:55, 14 November 2012 diff hist −159 Rochester, New York →Founding and early history: Removed line about Eastman philanthropy for institutions outside of Rochester. This is the Rochester article, not the Eastman article. Not relevant to this article.
16:5116:51, 14 November 2012 diff hist −16 Rochester, New York →Founding and early history: edited out "First Nations". This term is not widely used in the US; it is more prominent in Canada. Native Americans is the preferred term. In either case, the reference doesn't support First Nations.

15:3815:38, 30 October 2012 diff hist −666 Rikers Island removed unsourced content. No response to citation request made several months ago.

22:4622:46, 7 December 2011 diff hist +30 Japanese war crimes →Comfort women: slight wording change...abudcted and forced into prostitution, as a large portion of them were, is not really "recruiting". Modified to reflect various ways they were brought in, as per preponderance of sources already cited.
22:3822:38, 7 December 2011 diff hist +667 Talk:Japanese war crimes →requesting another change
14:5714:57, 7 December 2011 diff hist −599 The Blue Marble →The satellite imaging series: removed reference to non-notable video game. This seems like trivia not in the scope of the article. ~~~~ Tag: references removed

19:5719:57, 16 November 2011 diff hist −1,955 Hessian (soldier) →In popular culture: removed tangential references, or references that just used the word hessians without being about hessians, or were not notable (a unit in a video game, etc).~~~~
19:5419:54, 16 November 2011 diff hist −346 Hessian (soldier) →Hessian captives: removed material specific to someone's family member. Out of context/not proper for scope of article. I'm glad he became the ancestor of patriots...but that has nothing to do with hessians. ~~~~ Tag: references removed