Jumanji Script
Jumanji Script
Aqsa: OH NOO! How did we get here/? We got trapped in the game Jumanji!
Mitchell: ...were our exact reactions when we were in your place, exactly one year ago.
Krish: When we also found this video game in the basement of UTSC and foolishly decided to
play it…
Aqsa: ..and got trapped / inside just like you guys!
Mitchell: But don’t worry, since we have a little bit of experience, we know how to help you
escape and return home.
Aqsa: The key to escaping the game is to return the stone of Jumanji to the statue and break
the curse!
Aqsa: You will each be put into teams, each team has one stone, and you must race against
each other to be the first to place it at the top of the statue.
Mitchell: You all must learn how to deliver good news and correspondence and use that
information to break the Jumanji curse!
A: Again!
Mitchell: Wait, wait, wait! We almost forgot, they don’t even know who we are. Allow us to
introduce ourselves. I am Dr. Smolder Bravestone!
K: I am Moose Finbar!
K: Now here’s the fun part. / It seems that the game has decided to divide you all into three
teams. And in like any video game, your team will have weaknesses. Therefore, you are all a
part of a small team; and you are Team A. Your weakness is instant messaging.
You’re Team B. Your weakness is email. You’re team C, and your weakness is
correspondence.
A: It’s a race to the finish line/ and only 1 team can break the curse and escape/ while everyone
else is stuck here forever.
M: Together / we are going to teach you how to deliver good news and
improve on your weaknesses to escape the game.
S: I don’t think you all want to be stuck here forever! So let’s get to it! And together / we can
get some of you out of the game.
A: Wait a second, Dr. Bravestone what are you doing in that corner?
M: I’m writing a letter to my boss to tell him I’m not going to be at work today.
S: You know there isn’t any mailing service from the game to the outside world / right?
A: Lets see what you wrote… no offence but this is horrible/ Your format / and punctuation are
kind of amateur.
K: Dr. Bravestone, you had the same problem when we were stuck in the game a year ago!
Looks like we have to review letters in order to advance in the game.
S: Alright let’s start with letters then. Beginning with the top of the letter, is the company
letterhead and return address. The next step after this is to add the date and the inside
address. The date appear on the top left-hand corner. Along with the date, the inside address
should also be on the left side of the letter before the content starts.
K: The inside address includes the reader's name, title, company, and full mailing address.
Once that is finished, the next step is to do the attention line. / The purpose of the attention line
is to direct the letter towards a specific person. It can also be directed towards one appropriate
person while addressing others that also may deal with the topic. / In the given example above,
the attention line is for a supply chain coordinator, hence the letter is directed for that person
and position.
A: The attention line tends to carry forward to the salutation, which is the next requirement.
Using a person's name / and courtesy title is often better than vaguely writing dear sir and
ma’am. By stating their name and title, it will create / a connection with your reader. Now we are
ready to move onto the body of the letter. The body of the letter includes detailed information
regarding the subject matter outlined in a clear / and concise manner. Once the body of the
letter is written / we move onto the enclosures which ends the body of the letter. Enclosures are
also indicated with notations below the initials / in case any documents are attached.
S:The complimentary close is followed up with a signature and signature block which is where
the name of the writer is located, along with their position and signature. Initials appear at the
bottom left corner. Alright Dr. Bravestone, do you think that will help you with writing better
letters in the future?
M: Sure does! And I will definitely remember to format it professionally and have good
punctuation / unlike last time.
S: Now that that is solved. We are going to help each team with your weaknesses. But first let’s
remember our mantra.
A: Starting off with Team A. As mentioned before, your weakness is instant messaging. Don’t
worry, instant messaging is my strength so I will help you. Before we start you need to
understand that Instant Messaging and texting are extremely important means of
communicating in today's world. Texting is between a phone and phone device. And instant
messages are communicated from screen to screen, hence a computer to computer.
K: Instant messaging allows people to effectively share information and communicate quickly.
Say you are in a rush to get a second opinion on a task, instant messaging is perfect to quickly
seek input while a team member is out of the office.
M: However, it’s important to understand that along with these benefits, instant messaging can
pose problems as well. Due to people constantly turning on their devices, it can be distracting
and addictive for the wrong reasons.
K: To avoid this problem, use instant messaging only when important, such as answering
work-related messages and keep small talk to a minimum. Also when texting, keep messages
short and use familiar abbreviations only.
A: It’s also important to remember that text messages do not replace face to face conversations,
so if it is not an appropriate message to send through text, do /not do it! It’s also good to not
keep your status on “busy”/ or “away” as it defeats the purpose of instant messaging.
S: Patience is also key when expecting messages back. If you don’t get a reply right away, do
not send an email! Also, refrain from sending a message in a place where it is inappropriate to
take a call. For example: In a busy restaurant.
A: Also, if a coworker sends you a meeting invitation by email, don’t use instant messaging to
change the time or place of the meeting. Last, try your best to respond to messages as fast as
you can. You don’t want to keep the opposite person waiting for too long! Now, let us take a
second to look back at what we just learned. (review slide).
K: Now let’s see who leaves this place. / Only one group can go back to the real world, to their
normal, boring lives back at UTSC. Each group must try to demonstrate their knowledge they
have just learned. To do that, we will be posing a few true or false scenarios in which each
team will discuss briefly and quickly, to come to a mutual answer. / Once decided on an
answer, tap the table as fast as you can to answer if the scenario is right or wrong. You
snooze, you lose!
S: The team that gets the most answers right,/ will prove their ability of mastering their
knowledge needed to win the game.
K: Most importantly, remember that good news breaks the jumanji curse!!!
S: Lets begin!
1. K: Ok the first question: I need my coworker’s opinion on these charts I just made, he’s
not in the office right now, but my meeting is in 5 minutes, let me instant message him. Is
this right or wrong? -right
2. M- Letter heads in a business letter are not necessary. Right or wrong? - Wrong
3. K- It’s alright to send long messages through instant messaging. Right or Wrong? -
wrong
4. M- The date on a letter should appear on the top right corner. Right or wrong? - Wrong
because it should appear on the top left corner
5. K- All messages are appropriate to send through IM. Right or wrong? - Wrong
A: Congratulations Team X you / are one step closer to getting out of here! Alright, back to our
quest! Since we finished on the topic of instant messaging, let’s continue with emails which is
team B’s weakness. But no worries, we can work on making that a strength. I remember
learning from my communications midterm that there are two types of emails such as outgoing
and incoming. Is that right?
S: You are right / the two types are outgoing and incoming. Outgoing emails should be shorter,
concise and have a clear purpose to them. Incoming emails should be checked for regularly
and should be given prompt responses to maintain professionalism.
A: Emails are an efficient use of time, and cost efficient due to the low waste of paper. Emails
are one of the most commonly used marketing mediums. Emails are also usually used as
official records. Therefore, it’s useful to know how to write proper emails that deliver good
news.
M: Additionally, remember that even though emails are the most common medium nowadays,
paper-based memos can also be desirable. Professional memos have no salutation,
complimentary close, or signatures unlike professional emails. Even though memos aren’t used
as much, don’t think they don't matter as they can convey important information when emails
aren’t an option. Therefore, memos do make a big impact!
A: Great I think we’re covered for emails and memos now! So what's next?
S: In efforts of making the content brief,/ a common mistake can be to leave vague details.
Complete information is not just giving the facts / but stating why the information is meaningful
and important. Remember that in the midst all of this, correspondence should always be
“you-centered”.
S: Letters directed towards specific people should be personalized and be focused on that
person. This can be achieved using pronouns such as “you” and “your” as well as using their
name. Lastly, being optimistic and using positive phrases helps in maintaining a friendly
connection with them.
S: In using correspondence the direct approach helps in getting to the point quickly. Also called
the top-down approach or the pyramid approach / this method helps in clearly and explicitly
stating the message.
A: The basic pattern for good news is easy to follow if you remember the “put it up front”
principle which is: Putting up the most important details first. Giving supporting details. Ending
with a goodwill statement
K: Wait a second, from my knowledge, in Japan speaking directly is seen as rude and
unfriendly.
A: From this we can see that in different countries directness is received differently. However in
North America, the direct approach is usually favoured and the best.
PLAY CLIP
K: As we can see from the clip, Dr. Bravestone uses the direct approach when explaining my
role on the team. / He started off well by stating the facts upfront, but he failed to give strong
supporting details and did not end with a goodwill statement. Overall Dr. bravestone did a poor
job on presenting information using the direct approach.
S: Now that we are clear on what to do when using the direct approach, we can move onto
routine requests. When using routine requests, it’s best to keep requests explicit rather than
implied. Requests should also contain enough details so that the reader has no confusion. In
sending lengthy requests, it’s better to list questions rather than write a paragraph as it’s more
organized and clear.
Correct:
I’m considering for a position at your company. I have found out about your company recently
and have a few important clarifications. Followed by a short list of questions. As you can see
here, the message being more spaced out allows the reader’s eyes to take breaks, and focus
on one part at a time. Also the asks of the applicant aren’t hidden anymore, and are clearly
visibly stated
S: When replying to requests it’s best to use the direct approach and avoid negativity. So be
careful with your tone when speaking to a customer, and don’t drive them away with negativity.
Using neutral tones helps in keeping people satisfied and maintaining professionalism.
M: Alright now that we are finished with routine requests and replies let’s move onto claims.
When making claims it’s better to not beat around the bush and maintain straight forwardness
about what you expect the opposing party to do. For example, don’t exaggerate and get
sentimental, instead stick to the facts and it’s more likely your claim will be believed.
M: The direct approach is also used for routine and good news replies. For example, if you ever
have to deliver bad news, it is possible to be direct while giving it in a p
ositive way.
K: Rather than blaming the person, it works to solve the problem in a polite and concise
manner. By understanding how to deliver bad news in a positive way, it can keep both parties in
good relation and satisfied at the same time. / Alright, now that we covered routine and good
news replies, our last topic is letters of thanks and congratulations.
A: Genuinity is key in these letters as you want to show others your appreciation for their help/
and let them know that what they have done for you has benefited you. This can be achieved by
giving details about what you are thankful for and state why they are deserving of your
appreciation.
Conclusion:
S: Congratulations everybody, we have made it to the statue of Jumanji. But the journey isn’t
over just yet, only 1 team can climb to the top of the statue and return the stone of Jumanji.
Which team is worthy to climb to the top, win, and escape the game?
K: Let’s test your knowledge, which ever team gets the most correct will win their escape from
the game. / Remember to tap the table as fast as you can to answer if the scenario is right or
wrong. If you snooze, you lose! Remember, good news breaks the Jumanji curse.
Activity:
6. A- I just bought a new purse, i am very dissatisfied with the product, let me email
customer service / tell them what is wrong politely and what can be done to fix the
problem. Right or wrong? -right
7. S- Emails are very ineffective in the workplace. Right or wrong? - wrong
8. A- The direct approach of communication is accepted in every culture. Right or wrong. -
wrong.
9. S-I have a list of 10 things i need from my boss, let me send one big email to him with
everything in it. Right or wrong? -wrong
10. A-It’s better to send requests with enough detail so that the receiver has no confusion.
Right or wrong? - right
11. S-When making claims it’s better to make it emotional and personal so that the receiver
can connect better with the sender. Right or wrong? - Wrong. Instead you want to make
it direct and factual.
12. A- I have to ask my boss for a file in order for me to complete my task. Let me go to his
office, ask what he did over the weekend, ask him how his morning went, talk to him
about my day, then I’ll ask him for the file i need. Right or wrong? -wrong
M- Congratulations team X, you have successfully beaten the game by demonstrating your
excellent knowledge of good news and correspondence. You have broken the curse on
Jumanji and returned the stone successfully by learning good news and correspondence.
K: Unfortunately to the rest of the teams, you will be stuck in this game forever with no
escape. Team X when you return to the real world, be sure to use the knowledge you have
learned in this game in the workplace. / As a little souvenir for our winners to remember their
time in Jumanji we give to you a small edible replica of the Jumanji stone.
A: Over the course of this journey / we as a group overcame our weaknesses and learned to
deliver good news in different ways. Although the voice is a powerful way of communicating, it is
not the only means of presenting ideas and information. If this amazing adventure has taught
you anything let it be this. Letters / memos/ emails/ and instant messages are extremely
effective ways of communication if you execute them properly. Hopefully our help has taught
you ways to successfully deliver good news. Now let us shake your hands to send you back into
the real world