Primary 5 English Workshop: Developing Writing Skills
Primary 5 English Workshop: Developing Writing Skills
workshop
Developing writing skills
Outline
1. Overview of Paper 1
2. Situational Writing
3. Continuous Writing
4. Our Approach to Developing Writing
5. How to support your child
6. Q&A
PSLE examination syllabus
Paper 1 (Writing) – Assessment objectives
• AO1 Write to suit purpose, audience and context in a way that is clear and
effective
• AO2 Use appropriate register and tone in a variety of texts
• AO3 Generate and select relevant ideas, organising and expressing them in a
coherent and cohesive manner
• AO4 Use correct grammar, spelling and punctuation
• AO5 Use a variety of vocabulary appropriately, with clarity and precision
Situational writing
• Assesses students’ ability to convey information in different contexts
• Contexts can be informal or formal
• Students may be required to write emails, journal entries, reports etc.
• Question usually consists of:
• A visual text stimulus
• Task description
Your Task
Imagine you are the pupil in the last picture who went to
inform a teacher about the fight in the fitness corner.
You are to refer to the given pictures and details for your
email.
Informal Formal
• Salutation on first name basis (e.g. • Salutation based on formal title (e.g.
Dear John) Dear Mr. Tan)
• Opening greetings (e.g. How are you?) • Opening greetings not required
• Language more relaxed (e.g. We must • Language more objective (e.g. The date
register by… ) of registration is …)
• Closure with personal touch (e.g. I • Closure polite and brief (e.g. Thank
hope to hear from you soon.) you for your kind attention)
Continuous Writing
• Planning
• Identifying question requirements
• Story mountain
• 6 traits of writing: Ideas, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence
Fluency, Convention
• Showing and not telling
• Proofreading, editing, revising
Writing tips
Show and not tell
Tell Show
✗Jane was angry at her younger ✔With a flash of anger in her bulging
brother. eyes, Jane stomped her foot and
slammed the door behind her. Her
Telling the readers what you want them brother was left alone and confused in
to know the living room.
It was a bright morning. John woke up and John loves reading more than anything else.
brushed his teeth. He had breakfast and In fact, he is always seen in the library,
made his way to the library. sitting crossed-legged on the floor with a
book in his hands. Mr Bookworm, as his
friends like to call him, decided to visit the
school library one day.
Describing the character.
Writing tips: strong introductions
Techniques That Will Examples
Hook Your Readers
1. Dialogue “ Hurry or you’ll be late!” called my mother from the bottom of the
stairs. “Today of all days you want to be on time.” If I had only
know what that day would bring, I would have stayed in bed.
2. A Question Have you ever had a day when you wished you had stayed in bed? As
I rushed to catch the bus on what seemed to be a perfectly normal
day I had no idea what was ahead of me.
3. Sound “Buzz!” The sound of my alarm clock droned in my ears as I
struggled to come awake. With a start I sat straight up in my bed.
This was my big day and I had to be on time.
4. Flashback Amy has learnt her lesson. She wished she had listened to her
mother. Lying on the hospital bed, she could only blame herself for
the accident.
Supporting your child in writing
• Expose your child to a range of reading materials
• Build a climate of rich language at home
• Converse with your child about his daily experiences
• Talk about common experiences like your overseas trips
• Encourage frequent writing
• Keep a diary, journal etc.
• Seize occasions to involve your child in writing, e.g. sending holiday cards
Sample of good writing
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