Draft 1
Draft 1
BAR - NIGHT
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J
(V.O)
Njan aadhyam aayitta diary
ezhuthunne, enikk angana samsaarikaan
parichayakaar onnum illa, athukond
enthelum ezhuthaam enn vicharichu.
Arodenkilum okke onnu casual aayitt
onnu samsaarichitt varshangal aayi.
Enna pinne arodenkilum samsarichoode
enn chodhicha... ente joli adhinu
sammadhikoola.
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Silence in the air. Seems like only a few people live there.
J spots the skinny man getting into the ground floor
elevator.
J rushes to the stairs and runs up, passing the FIRST NFLOOR
and ultimately reaching the --
SECOND FLOOR
J bends down, takes out his cellphone and clicks the photo
of the dead man.
Silence.
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GROUND FLOOR
J walks down the stairs, looks around and strolls out of the
apartment.
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BOSS'S ROOM
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CLOSE UP: A money counting machine flips through a bundle of
cash from the briefcase.
Boss takes the bundle from the machine and places it back in
the case.
BOSS
(sips the drink)
ninte baaki share njan ivide
vachekaam... Avishyam varumbo
chodhicha mathi
J nods "ok"
4.
J gulps the entire drink, places the glass on the table and
stands up.
BOSS (CONT'D)
Enna sheri vitto...
J walks out.
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STAIRWELL
J walks up the stairs to the --
FIRST FLOOR
LIVING ROOM
J walks to the --
BEDROOM
J
(V.O)
Korach divasam mumb njan ivide
aduthulla oru beach-il poyi. Ottak
aayirunnu, eppozhathem pole. Kurach
neram kazhinjappo ente eduth oru penn
vann irunnu... Njangal parasparam
samsarichonnum illa, ennalum avar
avide undayirunnath kond enikk ente
akath entho oru maattam feel cheythu.
(a beat)
Pinne njan avare ith vare
kandittilla.
FLASHBACK:
Silence.
J and a woman, who looks few years younger than him, sit on
a bench.
FLASHBACK ENDS.
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BEDROOM
J draws a line under the page and closes the diary. Sighs.
Establishing shot
6.
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The noodles are kept for boiling in the stove.
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LIVING ROOM
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J takes the noodles pan out of the stove and transfers the
noodles into a plate.
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LIVING ROOM
A stray cat sits on the floor. J strokes the cat and places
a small bowl of noodles for it. The cat starts to eat.
J sits on the couch and starts eating from his plate while
staring at the TV.
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The TV now plays the song ekanthathayude maha theeram from
the Malayalam film Bhargavi Nilayam.
BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT.
BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT.
BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT. BEAT.
He gives up.
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8.
J turns the lights off, sits on the couch and lays his legs
on the teapoy.
ROOM XXX
FLASHBACK:
DOCTOR
Molkk oru donor-ine kitteetund
V is shocked.
DOCTOR (CONT'D)
Pakshe... ekadhesham oru 25 laksham
rupa engilum aavum. Athrem undo?
9.
(OMITTED)
LIVING ROOM
A die rolls on the floor and faces the side with the number
two.
Reveal that - V and his 14 year old DAUGHTER are sitting in
the middle of the room, playing snake and ladder.
DAUGHTER
Kalikk
V
Achan ippa varaam
V gets up and walks to the-
BATHROOM
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LIVING ROOM
DAUGHTER
mathi... Vayar naranj.
V stops feeding her.
DAUGHTER (CONT'D)
TV kandotte? Bore adikkuvaa
V
Kurach neram rest edukk... TV pinne
kanaam.
DAUGHTER
Tsk... Ippo kaananam
V sighs.
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The TV is playing 'Doraemon'. Daughter lies on the couch,
watching it.
The door opens and V walks in. He sits next to daughter and
takes out an orange lolipop from his pocket.
V
Inna
DAUGHTER
Pacha medikaan alle paranje?
She puts the lolipop in her mouth.
V
Pacha avide theern poyi
11.
A beat.
V (CONT'D)
(CONT'D)
Achan onnu porathu poyitt varaave...
DAUGHTER
evideya?
V
oru aale kanaan
DAUGHTER
kore neram edukuvo thirich ethumbo?
V
Illa ippo thanne varaam... TV kando,
vathil njan purathenn pootiyekaam
DAUGHTER
mmm... Varumbo pacha lolipop olla
kada undonn nokkanam.
J
Aah
J kisses daughter on the cheek and walks out.
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TEENAGE BOY
(to V)
Achan office-ila... enth avishyam
aanengilum achan ollapo varaan
paranj.
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FAT MAN
Edo ente kayil evidenn indaayitta?
Than onnu parayana manasilaak... Ente
swantham aavishyathinu polum ente
kayil onnum illa.
(a beat)
Undenki njan thannenne... vere
aarodenkilum chodhikk. illatha konda
V
Molda karyam aaya konda... enthelum
FAT MAN
Njan paranjille ente kayil illa...
onnu manasilaakado
V
Aah
FAT MAN
Enikk oru bus pidikaan und, njan
pokkotte
Fat man rushes away. V stands there scratching his head.
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V puts his phone back and notices the sedan. The man in the
passenger’s seat, LOAN SHARK, has put out his head out of
the window and is looking right at V - they know each other.
Loan shark gets out of the van and so does one of his
henchman, from the back of the van. The two men start
following V.
V slowly turns his head back and sees Loan shark and the
henchman following him from a few feet behind – V’s heart
skips a beat.
V
(to loan shark)
Njan tharaam... oru aazhcha koodi
samayam thaa...
LOAN SHARK
Myre ee aazhcha tharaann alle nee
paranje
V
Ente molkk oru surgereede avishyam
und. Ente kayyil aage kurach paisaye
ollu, athu ninagkk thanna pinne ente
kayil onnum baaki undaavilla... Njan
pattunnna pole tharaam.
LOAN SHARK
Athsheri
The henchman whispers something in Loan shark’s ear.
LOAN SHARK
Enth surgeya?
V
Ee lungs maati vakaan
LOAN SHARK
Nee army-eel engaand aayirunnille?
V
Aah
14.
LOAN SHARK
Appo thokk okke upayogikaan
ariyaarikoolo?
V is confused.
LOAN SHARK (CONT'D)
Ariyille?
V
(nods)
Ariyaam
LOAN SHARK
Enna vaa
V
Engotta?
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The sedan stays in the middle of the road. V walks to the
back door and tries to open it – it’s locked. He walks to
the front door.
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V, Loan shark and his henchman, stands in front of the
building’s door.
BOSS’S HENCHMAN
(pointing at V)
Ith araa?
LOAN SHARK
Nammade aalaa
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FIRST FLOOR
BOSS’S ROOM
V is confused.
Boss spits a part of the chicken bone on the plate and stops
eating... moves the plate to the side.
LOAN SHARK
(to V, gestures him to come)
Vaa
V comes and stands next to the loan shark.
BOSS
(to V)
Enth cheyunnu?
V
Ippo onnum cheyunnilla... Kurach
varsham army-il aayirunnu.
V (CONT'D)
Pinne ivide vannitt government joli
enthelum kittuvo enn nokki... onnum
sheri aayilla
BOSS
enthina vilipiche enn ariyuvo?
V shakes his head "no"
Boss opens the table's drawer and takes out the photographs
of 5 men and places it on the table. Let's call the five men
TARGET #1, TARGET #2, TARGET #3, TARGET #4 and TARGET #5.
(TARGET #5 is the FIFTH MAN that we saw before the
flashback)
BOSS (CONT'D)
ee 5 pere nee kollanam
V, perplexed, looks at Boss.
BOSS (CONT'D)
Ivanmaarade kayil 2 kodi vila varunna
cocaine und. Ivare konnitt athu enikk
konda tharanam. 10 shathamaanam,
athayath 20 laksham ninak tharum.
BOSS (CONT'D)
Alochich theerumanam edutha mathi
V starts to think.
BOSS (CONT'D)
eppazha kollande, evide vacha
kollande ennokke theerumanam eduthitt
parayaam.
V
Njan cheyaam... Pakshe enikk 30
laksham venam
BOSS
20 lakshathin entha kuzhappam?
V
Ente molde oru surgery-eede
avishyathina. 25 laksham aavum.
BOSS
tsk tsk tsk tsk... Sheri 30 laksham
tharaam. Pakshe joli kazhinjatte
tharoolu
Boss takes out a piece of paper from the drawer and places
it in front of V.
BOSS (CONT'D)
(points at the paper)
kollanda sthalam, samayam... ellam
ithil und.
BOSS (CONT'D)
Aa paper-nte purakil oru adress und.
Avide chenna oraaal ninak oru 9 mm
pistol tharum. Athum kond venam
pokaan
LIVING ROOM
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V sits on the couch, next to daughter and feeds her
porridge.
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BEDROOM
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V comes in.
He leads V to the --
ADJACENT ROOM
Where he pulls out a key from his pocket and opens a drawer
in front of him. He takes out a 9 mm pistol, its silencer
and two magazines from the drawer and hands all of it to V.
19.
V puts the magazines and the silencer too inside his pants.
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INT. APARTMENT BUILDING #3 - CONTINUOUS
TARGET #1
(to V)
aara?
V sees the other 4 targets in the room, drinking, smoking
and playing cards.
A beat.
TARGET #1 (CONT'D)
Edo thannoda chodhich-
Before Target #1 could finish his sentence, V takes the 9 mm
out, to which the silencer is fixed, and shoots Target #1’s
fucking head off!
20.
The other targets stop doing what they were doing and stare
at V in shock.
INT. ROOM 416 - CONTINUOUS
Target #4 hits V hard on the face twice and then kicks him
on the balls. V screams in pain and almost passes out.
V
Cocaine evideya irikane enn paranja
veruthe vidaam
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BATHROOM IN THE ROOM
BOSS’S ROOM
BOSS finishes his drink and keeps the glass aside. He looks
at the bag, then opens it. He sees the cocaine stash and
looks impressed.
22.
BOSS
(chuckles)
Nee njan vicharicha pole allallo
Boss makes a drink for V and offers it to V.
V
(rejecting the drink)
Njan nirtheetha
BOSS
Vendanki venda...
Boss drinks it up.
Boss opens his table’s drawer and keeps a plastic bag on the
table. Boss gestures V to take it.
V picks up the plastic bag and opens it, the bag has the 30
lakhs he asked for. He hasn’t seen that much money ever in
his life. He doesn’t know what to say. He keeps the bag on
his laps.
BOSS (CONT'D)
Ineem ithupole paisa undakande? Koode
koodikko. Velliyaazhcha oru pani
undo... Nee cheytholuvo?
V
Illa illa, enikk avishyam olla paisa
kitti... ini enikkonum venda, njan
eranguvaa
BOSS
Athu kollaam... nine polathe oraalde
korave ivide ollu
V
Enikk ente molde karyangal nokaan und
BOSS
Ah........ thante molde karyam njan
marannu poyi… appo mol aanalle
prashnam. Thante bharya ille?
A beat.
V
Prasavathil marich poyi
BOSS
Oh... Tsk
(MORE)
23.
BOSS (CONT'D)
(pauses)
Enna pokko... manas mariya ingot
thirich varaavunnathaanu. Njan onnum
parayilla
V
Alla, njan ini ingott illa
BOSS
Orappicho?
V
Mmm
BOSS
Swantham avishyam kazhinjappo nammale
onnum vendalle
(chuckles)
V
Njan paranjallo... molde karyam
BOSS
Mole athrakk ishtam aano?
V nods “yes”
BOSS (CONT'D)
(chuckles)
Enna vitto... mol veetil ottak
alle...
Silence.
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INT. V’S HOUSE – LATE EVENING
LIVING ROOM
V sits on the couch, applying ice on his wounds. Daughter
sits near.
24.
DAUGHTER
(in a broken voice)
Entha pattiye?
V
Onnum illa... (sniffs) nammade
prashnam okke theeraan pokuva
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LIVING ROOM
The TV plays.
An open bag of chips lie on the couch.
J sits on the floor, leaning on the couch. He reaches his
hand, grabs a few chips and eats them.
J
Hello
BOSS
(through the phone)
Aah, ninak naale oru pani und
J
Entha?
J stands there attending the call, Boss is talking on the
other side of the phone but we can’t hear him. J keeps
nodding his head and talks indistinctively.
The car comes from behind... the back door slightly opens...
The car stops by the side of daughter. The back door fully
opens, J’s hand reaches out at daughter and takes her inside
the car. The door closes and the car speeds ahead.
V
Ente mol…
(screams)
26.
BOSS
Alochich oru theerumanam eduthitt
vilikk
Partner gets out and walks to the back door. On the other
side of the car, daughter opens the door and runs towards
the main road. J gets out of the car as well.
Daughter gets to the main road... we see a car coming
towards her and
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BLACK screen.
We hear a – CRAAAAAAASH!!!
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Daughter has been hit by the car that was coming towards
her. She lies in the middle of the road, DEAD.
PARTNER
Nammak pokaam... Ivide nikkana safe
alla
LIVING ROOM
He slams his fist against the wall. He then leans his head
on the wall and closes his eyes.
FIRST FLOOR
BOSS’S ROOM
Boss runs to the bathroom in the room and tries to close the
door, but V pushes it from outside. V kicks the door,
swinging it open. V steps into the
BATHROOM
Boss chokes V using one hand and aims a punch at V’s head
but V catches Boss’s fist using his hand.
J
Hello
BOSS
Nee veetil ille?
J
Aah, entha
BOSS
Alla onnum illa... Njan pinne
vilikaam
Boss hangs up. J sits confused. He smells some trouble.
BEDROOM
PARTNER
Aah para
BOSS
(through the phone)
Nee evideya ippo?
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INT. BOSS’S BUILDING – SAME TIME
BOSS’S ROOM
Boss is on the call, sitting at his table. The call is on
speaker mode. It’s revealed that V has placed the knife at
the tip of Boss’s throat from behind.
PARTNER
(through the phone)
Veetil und
31.
BOSS
Veetil undalle... ah njan vilichath
enthaann vacha- allengi onnum illa.
Nee phone vacho.
PARTNER
(through the phone)
Eh?
Boss hangs up the call.
V
Avar rand perum evideyokkeya
thamasikkane enn ithil ezhuthu.
BOSS
Enne veruthe viduvo?
V slightly touches Boss’s throat with the knife. Boss
doesn’t say a word more, he writes down the address of the
two men.
V takes the knife off boss, then walks around and faces
Boss.
BEDROOM
32.
J moans in pain.
33.
THE END