Cách tính điểm

WRITING TASK 2 - CÁCH TÍNH ĐIỂM

40 phút - 250 words

4 tiêu chí chấm điểm

Task Response (TR) - Trả lời yêu cầu đề bài

Trả lời đầy đủ, phát triển các ý chính tốt, có luận điểm rõ ràng.

Quan điểm rõ ràng và nhất quán.

Coherence and Cohesion (CC) - Mạch lạc và Liên kết

Bài viết chia đoạn rõ ràng

Sử dụng từ nối (On the one hand / On the other hand / In conclusion / Firstly /
Additionally / Moreover / As a result)

Lexical Resource (LR) - Từ vựng

Vốn từ vựng chính xác và linh hoạt / phong phú.

Environment: thân thiện với môi trường = environmentally-friendly

Có sử dụng collocations + từ vựng học thuật

Decide → make a decision

Grammatical Range and Accuracy (GRA) - Ngữ pháp đa dạng và chính xác

Có thể có lỗi nhưng không làm cho giảm độ hiểu bài.

Không có lỗi hệ thống (It create → SAI)

Đa dạng cấu trúc: câu đơn + câu ghép + câu phức (nhiều nhất)

Câu ghép: I love eating fish, and my sister buys fish for me every day.

Câu phức: The boy wearing a black shirt is my friend.

Sườn bài
Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a
successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after
school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Mở bài:

When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue
their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I
would argue that it is better to go to college or university.

The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many
young people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they can
become independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In
terms of their career, young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their
studies, may progress (tiến bộ) more quickly. They will have the chance to gain real
experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to
promotions and a successful career.

2 reasons = ?

Personal: start earning money as soon as possible → become independent,

afford their own house or start a family

Career: progress more quickly → have the chance to gain real

experience and learn practical skills → promotions

Những từ nối đã được sử dụng

On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their
studies. Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example,
it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher, or lawyer without having the relevant
degree. As a result, university graduates have access to more and better job
opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications.
Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there
are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not
have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete.

2 benefits = ?

Những từ nối đã được sử dụng

Kết bài:

For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be
successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond the school level.

271 words

● Mở bài + Kết bài

● Câu chủ đề
● Cách triển khai ý
● Ráp thành bài hoàn chỉnh

Học text construct (mở bài = 2, Thân bài 1 = Thân bài 2 = 5 câu, Kết bài = 1 câu, có topic
sentence)

Đọc bài để lấy ideas

Lên outline

Viết nháp (xếp ideas vô thành câu, thành đoạn)

Sửa (ngữ pháp + từ vựng)

Đọc kiểm dò
Sắp xếp câu Education
Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others
believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the
future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give
your own opinion.

1. Arts and humanities, for instance, play a crucial role in cultural development and
help us to understand human behaviour, ethics, and history.
2. On the other hand, allowing students the freedom to choose their preferred
courses fosters motivation and creativity.
3. In conclusion, although studying practical subjects offers clear benefits, I believe
that universities should prioritise student choice.
4. As a result, students can enjoy greater job security and financial stability in the
long run.
5. There is a debate over whether university students should be free to choose their
preferred fields of study, or whether they should focus solely on subjects that are
considered practical for future employment.
6. Furthermore, society benefits from a diverse range of skills and perspectives.
7. Firstly, these fields are in high demand in the modern job market, meaning that
graduates are more likely to secure well-paying jobs.
8. Restricting education to only technical subjects could lead to a narrow, less
vibrant society.
9. While both perspectives have merit, I personally believe that students should be
encouraged to follow their interests.
10. On othe ne hand, focusing on practical subjects like science and technology has
clear advantages.
11. When students are passionate about what they study, they are more likely to
excel and make meaningful contributions in their chosen fields, regardless of
whether those fields are immediately "practical."
12. Secondly, investing time and resources in these subjects ensures that young
people are prepared to tackle pressing global challenges, such as climate change
and public health crises.
 13. This benefits not only the individual students but also the economy as a whole,
since a workforce with advanced technical skills can drive innovation and
productivity.

Câu nêu ngữ cảnh ở Mở bài

Câu nêu quan điểm chính ở Mở bài

Câu chủ đề ở Thân bài 1

Quan điểm 1 của Thân bài 1:

Quan điểm 2 của Thân bài 1:

Câu chủ đề ở Thân bài 2

Quan điểm 1 của Thân bài 2:

Quan điểm 2 của Thân bài 2:

Câu Kết bài