Writing task 1+2
Writing task 1+2
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INTRODUCTION OF WRITING TASK 2
A. Assessment criteria
1. Task response
3. Lexical resource
NOTE:
- No contractions (he’s, can’t…) - No informal language (idioms) - Do not use “so on/ … / etc.”
- No “YOU/ WE” - Do not raise a question - Always try to paraphrase.
B. Types of writing task 2
Dạng 1: Opinion
“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly, so it would be better to
invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree?
Dạng 2: Discussion/ Discussion and opinion
It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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Dạng 3: Advantages and disadvantages (+opinion)
It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Dạng 4: Problems – Solutions / Causes – effects
An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries
to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this?
Dạng 5: Two-part questions
The Internet is a great source of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the
world. Is all information reliable on the Internet? What could be done to control information online?
Practice: Identify the types of these following exercises
1. Scientists and technology experts seem to be more values by modern society than musicians and artists. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
2. Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is
better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
3. Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside
large urban centres. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
4. In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry
and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?
5. More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the
reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
6. Some people believe that men and women are equal, so women should be able to do any job they want. Others
feel that men and women are not equal and therefore, there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women.
What is your opinion?
7. Many small, local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area. How
does this affect local communities? How could this situation be improved?
8. Most people agree that money cannot be happiness. Why is happiness difficult to define? How can people
achieve happiness?
9. In most countries around the world, children begin learning the English language at school from the primary
level. What are the benefits and drawbacks of teaching the English language to children at an early age?
10. Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of
success? What makes a successful person?
11. Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music
still have a place in today’s modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and
music at school?
12. It is often said “When in Rome, do as the Romans do”. Do you think people should adapt & accept the culture
of the country they are visiting? Do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning the language?
13. Many people in society believe that having fixed punishments for all crimes is a more efficient way of dealing
with criminals in the justice system. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment?
14. Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative
development?
15. Influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of
biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest?
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16. Some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal
qualities when they look for new employees. Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development?
C. Structure of an essay
Intro (2 sentences)
Câu 1: Paraphrase the topic => Background sentence
Câu 2: Give a clear answer to the question (your opinion HERE if any) => Thesis statement
Body (2 paragraphs – 5 to 7 sentences for each paragraph)
Câu 1: Topic sentence
Câu 2: Supporting idea 1
Câu 3-4: Explanation + Example
Câu 5: Supporting idea 2
Câu 6-7: Explanation + Example
Conclusion (1-2 sentences)
Restate the thesis statement (paraphrase the intro)
Practice: Identify different parts of the structure in this sample
Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an argument that exploring space is a waste of money and that there are more urgent needs to be addressed
on earth, such as reducing poverty and preventing environmental destruction. However, I completely disagree with
this opinion for two reasons.
First of all, many of the technologies we take for granted today were originated thanks to space research. Take
satellite technology, for example, which we depend on for broadcasting and weather forecasting. Without satellites,
we would not be able to follow global events as they happen, nor give populations any warning of approaching
storms. Space research has also led to the development of new lightweight materials that offer us heat protection and
enable food preservation. Therefore, the challenge of sending human beings into space has often driven the
development of new technologies that benefit our everyday lives.
Second, we cannot foresee the distant future, so we ought to develop the capability to escape from the earth.
Gradually, we are learning how humans can survive for long periods in space and even travel to other planets in the
future. If space exploration is halted, this valuable knowledge will never be acquired. It is true that environmental
destruction is also a serious issue, but it is also true that we remain dependent on our environment if we never accept
the challenge of exploring other worlds.
In conclusion, while we undoubtedly face serious problems on our own planet, it is imperative that we continue to
explore space. This will promote further technological advances as well as provide a possible means of escape should
earth become uninhabitable in future. Ideally, all nations should cooperate in the advancement of space research.
(278 words, IELTS 8.5)
D. Time allocation
Identify the type of question + Make an outline – 5 mins
Intro – 5 mins
2 bodies – 25 mins
Conclusion + check – 5 mins
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E. Paraphrase the topic
Background sentence + thesis statement = introduction
Restate the thesis statement = conclusion
1. Sử dụng từ đồng nghĩa:
Những từ có nhiều khả năng thay thế được trong câu gồm có lượng từ, động từ, tính từ hoặc trạng từ
A lot of people think that educational activities should be added in children’s free time.
2. Thay đổi hình thức từ (word form):
VD 1: Some people think that environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as
individuals can do too little.
Protection (n) →
Environmental (adj) →
Responsibility (n) →
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VD 2: Robots will replace humans in driving cars in the not-faraway future.
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VD 3: Using a computer every day can have negative effects on children.
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3. Thay đổi cấu trúc câu từ bị động sang chủ động:
VD: The government should spend money on saving languages that are used by few speakers.
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4. Sử dụng chủ ngữ giả:
VD 1: Some people think the government should ban dangerous sports.
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VD 2: Many animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities both on land and in the sea.
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5. Kết hợp các cách
VD 1: Some people think that environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as
individuals can do too little.
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VD 2: Many animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities both on land and in the sea.
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VD 3: Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports.
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Practice: Violent programs on TV are having a bad effect on society, so they should be restricted. To what extent
do you agree or disagree?
Introduction:
Conclusion:
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Dạng 1: Opinion
A. One-sided approach (completely agree/ disagree)
1. Intro:
- Paraphrase the topic
There is currently a contentious argument over whether …
- Thesis statement:
In my opinion, I completely agree/ disagree with this idea because of some reasons which will be
discussed in the essay below.
2. Body 1:
The main reason why SV is because… [reason 1]
3. Body 2:
Another reason for N/Ving … is due to + N/ due to the fact that + MĐề [reason 2]
4. Conclusion:
In conclusion, I believe that + restatement of the thesis statement
In conclusion, I personally side with the view that
PRACTICE:
Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
PRACTICE:
When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Dạng 2: DISCUSSION
SIGNALS:
1. Discuss both views
2. Discuss both views and give your opinion => tương đồng dạng Opinion – balanced approach
TEMPLATE
1. Intro:
- Paraphrase the topic: Some people hold/ are of + the view/opinion that S+V, while others believe S+V.
- Thesis statement:
In this essay, I will discuss the rationales behind these two views (before showing why I favor the
former/ the latter)
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2. Body 1:
On the one hand, there are people who argue that…
3. Body 2:
On the other hand, others believe that…..
4. Conclusion: => restate the thesis statement
In conclusion, while SV, I would side with/ I completely agree with those who believe that SV
PRACTICE
Topic: Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution; however,
others think there are some other ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
PRACTICE:
Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is
more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?
PRACTICE
Topic: There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What
might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?
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2. COHERENCE AND
COHESION
3. LEXICAL RESOURCE
4. GRAMMATICAL
RANGE AND
ACCURACY
B. TYPES OF GRAPHS
1. LINE GRAPH 2. BAR CHART
6. PROCESS 7. MAP
1. Tên biểu đồ
Graph = line graph The map = the diagram
Chart = bar chart/ pie chart/ table/ flow chart
2. Illustrate/ show data about/ give information about/ describe/ present/ demonstrate/ indicate/ highlight…
Compare + countries/… + in terms of +…
3. Đv danh từ đếm được
The number/ quantity of = The figure for = How many + SV
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4. Đv danh từ không đếm được
The amount/ volume/ quantity of = The figure for = How much + SV
Figure for
Figure for + danh từ số nhiều. Ví dụ: the figure for visitors to the UK
Figure for + các danh từ không đếm được. Ví dụ: the figure for unemployment
Figure for + đất nước (countries). Ví dụ: the figure for the UK
5. Đv tỉ lệ, phần trăm
- percentage: tỷ lệ phần trăm
- proportion: tỷ phần => 2/3, ¾ => Only use this to describe % (not numbers) => ~ percentage
- rate: tỷ lệ/ tốc độ (fast/ slow) => heart rate/ unemployment rate
ko thay thế cho “percentage/ proportion” VD: GDP growth rates - The percentage of GDP growth
- ratio: tỷ lệ => one in five (tương quan)
6. Đv đối tượng
In the three countries = In the A, B, and C (name all the countries) = In three different countries = In three
countries namely A, B, and C
7. Đv thời gian
1 năm => in 1999 => in the year 1999 Khoảng thời gian
2 năm => in 1980 and 2000 From 1999 to 2009 / Between 1999 and 2009
Over two separate years Over a period of ten years
In two different years Over a ten-year period
Figures are given for 1980 and 2000 During ten years from 1999
over the next three days/ three days later/ in the following three days
the first/ last/ final year
at the beginning/ end of the period
PRACTICE
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OVERVIEW - GRAPHS WITH A TREND
Sentence 1:
Overall, … = Looking at this chart, it is evident that... = As can be inferred from the chart, …
There + be + an (adj) upward/ downward trend + in + đối tượng
= The trend in + đối tượng + was (adv) upward/ downward.
Sentence 2: Miêu tả đặc điểm nổi bật nhất về order => Lớn nhất hoặc nhỏ nhất
Chú ý: Overview KHÔNG được cho số liệu
PRACTICE
The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London, 2000-2010.
Overview:
2. Adjective + noun
Adjective Noun
a/an Strong (ko đi với increase) Slow continual Increase
Sharp Significant Slight stable Rise
Sudden Substantial Minimal moderate Growth
Rapid Considerable Marginal steady Development
Quick Remarkable Fractional consistent Climb
Steep Negligible progressive Jump
Dramatic /ˈneɡlɪdʒəbl/ smooth
Striking gradual
2. Noun phrase
There + be + no change + in + đối tượng + time
no significant fluctuation
a period of stability
a plateau /ˈplætəʊ/
PRACTICE
Practice 2: (>3) The chart graph shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different types of
attractions from 1980 to 2010.
BAR CHARTS
A. Bar charts with a trend
The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.
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B. Comparative bar charts
Exercise 2: Ranking information
PRACETICE 1:
The chart below shows annual pay (in thousands of dollars) of doctors and other workers in 7 countries in 2004.
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PIE CHART
I. Dạng 1: thay đổi theo thời gian (trend)
Overall: C1. Xu hướng C2. Hạng mục có số liệu ấn tượng nhất
The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.
Practice 1: The pie charts show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
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Practice 2: The graphs below show a comparison of the expenses in the UK and the US.
TABLE
Dạng 1: Có sự thay đổi theo thời gian (TREND)
- Sử dụng các cấu trúc miêu tả xu hướng
- Chú ý đến những sự thay đổi lớn nhất trong khoảng thời gian đó
Dạng 2: Không có sự thay đổi theo thời gian (COMPARATIVE)
- Sử dụng các cấu trúc so sánh
1. So sánh tất cả hạng mục (ở các cột và dòng) với nhau thay vì từng ô riêng lẻ ở bảng thông tin.
2. Nếu không thể so sánh tất cả hạng mục, hãy so sánh các yếu tố chiếm tỷ lệ lớn nhất và nhỏ nhất.
3. Body 1: các số liệu lớn nhất
Body 2: các số liệu nhỏ nhất hoặc các số liệu bằng nhau
NOTES:
1. The proportion of people using the Internet in the USA was about 20%. The figures for Canada and Mexico
were lower, at about 10% and 5% respectively. => Số liệu ở cuối
2. Around 9% of Americans were ages 65 or over, compared to about 7% of Swedish people and 5% of Japanese
people. => Số liệu ở đầu
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3. Electronic or computer games are much more preferred by boys than by girls. The figures are slightly over 80%
and 60% respectively. Likewise, bike riding also attracts boys more than girls in their spare time. Boy’s
involvement in this activity is nearly 80%, whereas the figure for girls is a little under 60%.
Bài 1:
Bài 2: The table below shows key data on the demographics of four different countries.
Bài 4: The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012, and 2014.
PRACTICE 1:
The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular
countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
PRACTICE 2:
The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa.
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PROCESS/ DIAGRAM
DẠNG 1: Manufacturing/ man-made process (MP)
- Clear order => always follow the order
- Passive voice
STRUCTURE:
1. Opening
The diagram + shows/ illustrates/ demonstrates/ describes + the + process/ various steps/ various
stages/ various phases + …
C1. of how + Sth is produced/ manufactured.
C2. of how to produce/ manufacture + Sth
C3. of + danh từ
C1 và C2 thường dùng cho MP; C3 cho NP.
Example:
- The diagram shows the various stages of how fresh apples are canned.
- The diagram illustrates the various steps of how to can fresh apples.
- The diagram demonstrates the involved stages in the lives of silkworms and the process of silk cloth production.
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2. Overview
- How many steps?
- What are the first and the last step?
As can be seen, …
C1. There are … main stages (steps) in the process (of Sth/ producing Sth), beginning with …
and ending with…
C2. The process (of Sth/ producing Sth) includes … main stages (steps), beginning with … and
ending with…
Example:
- There are five stages in the process, beginning with the collection of information about the weather and ending
with broadcasting to the public.
- The process includes seven main stages, beginning with digging clay and ends with delivering./
The process includes seven main stages, beginning with the clay digging and ends with delivery.
3. Body => describe all steps
- Paraphrase các keywords => chuyển đổi linh hoạt giữa danh từ - động từ, bị động - chủ động.
- Có thể bắt đầu body 2 từ step giữa của process.
- Đánh số các steps để không sót steps.
- Nếu process có ít hơn 9 steps => viết mỗi step = 1 câu => đảm bảo 150 words.
Nếu process > 9 steps => gộp steps => đảm bảo đủ thời gian.
NOTES:
- Dùng Present simple tense
- Dùng “Sequencing language”
The first step: Subsequent steps:
The first step/ stage in the process is Secondly,
The process begins/ commences with Before/ After/ Once
Firstly, The process continues with
The final steps: The next step is
The process finishes/ concludes with In the next/ following stage,
The last step is Following this,
Finally, / In the final step, After that, / Afterwards, / Next, / Then, / Subsequently,
At the + STT stage of the process,
- Tham khảo 1 số từ vựng để diễn tả process
Useful vocabulary
Dạng
1: MP
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Dạng
2: NP
Vocab
về
cycle
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Bài 1: The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
MAP
DẠNG 1: KO CÓ THAY ĐỔI THEO THỜI GIAN => SINGLE MAP
- Ít xuất hiện
- Dùng Hiện tại đơn
- Cần so sánh 2 địa điểm + đặc điểm xung quanh chúng
STRUCTURE:
1. Opening
paraphrase lại câu ở đề bài bằng các từ đồng nghĩa hoặc thay đổi cấu trúc câu.
Example:
Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and
two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.
The map shows two potential locations (S1 and S2) for a new shopping mall in Brandfield/ in a city called
Brandfield.
2. Overview
Overall, the + [danh từ] + [witness] radical changes with the most noticeable being + [cụm danh từ].
Đặc điểm chung của 2 maps
Các cụm danh từ để nêu điểm khác biệt giữa 2 bản đồ thường dùng:
The relocation and expansion of + ABC: sự di dời và mở rộng của + ABC
The replacement of ABC for XYZ: sự thay thế của cái cũ (ABC) cho cái mới (XYZ) => replace Sth with Sth
The addition of ABC: sự thêm vào của ABC
The erection of ABC: sự xây dựng thêm ABC
The disappearance of ABC: sự biến mất của ABC
3. 2 Bodies => Mô tả những thay đổi lớn
VD
Phương
hướng
/əˈdʒeɪsnt/
- Run along/ alongside = chạy dọc theo, song song với
- At the top/ at the bottom = in the North/ in the South
- On the left/ right
- On the left hand side
- Opposite to/ in front of/ behind
- Clockwise/ anticlockwise = theo/ ngược chiều kim đồng hồ
- Just beyond/ a little beyond/ just pass = đi qua, quá 1 chút
- In the middle = in the centre
- Above/ below
- Inside/ outside
- Adjoining (adj) liền kề, sát nhau = be joined with
- On the bank of the river = bên bờ sông
- On the coast of the sea = đường bờ biển
Shapes - Circle/ round (n) => circular (adj) = round
- Square/ triangle/ rectangle (n) => square/ triangular/ rectangular (adj)
- Dome (n) (adj) hình vòm
Dome-shaped (adj)
Item: Buildings
Built, constructed, erected, added, introduced: Được xây lên
Ví dụ: A power plant was constructed to the east of the mine.
Renovated, reconstructed, modernized: Được xây lại
Ví dụ: The university library was completely renovated.
Converted, transformed, turned, changed (into something): Được biến đổi thành …
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Ví dụ: The playground was converted into a large car park.
Replaced (by/ with something): Được thế chỗ bởi …
Ví dụ: The garden was replaced by a large car park.
Moved/ Relocated (to somewhere): Được di dời tới …
Ví dụ: The student hall was relocated to the east of the university.
Extended, expanded, widened, become bigger/smaller (chủ động): Được mở rộng
Ví dụ: The hotel was greatly extended to a total of 70 rooms.
Stay the same, still exist, remain unchanged => ALL (chủ động)
Demolished, knocked down, flattened, removed/ disappear (chủ động): Bị dỡ bỏ
Ví dụ: The warehouse was demolished and replaced by a garage.
Item: Trees/Forest
Cut-down, chopped down: Bị chặt hạ
Cleared (to make way for): Bị xóa sổ để dành chỗ cho
Ví dụ: The forests on the western end of the island were chopped down to make way for a hotel.
Planted: Được trồng
Ví dụ: Many palms were planted around the villa.
Item: Bridge, port, road, railway, etc.
Constructed, built, erected: Được xây lên
Ví dụ: A bridge across the river was erected.
Lengthened: được kéo dài
Narrowed/ shortened/ become smaller (chủ động): được thu hẹp, rút ngắn
Extended, expanded, widened: Được mở rộng
Ví dụ: The main road was widen to meet the increasing demand.
Reopened: Được khôi phục
Ví dụ: The old railway alongside the river has been reopened.
Item: Amenities
Opened up, set up, established: Được xây dựng
Ví dụ: A new theme park was opened just opposite the shopping mall.
Developed, expanded: Được mở rộng
Ví dụ: The cinema was rapidly expanded.
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Bài 1: The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Bài 2: The maps below show how the town of Harborne changes from 1936 to 2007.