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UPSC Geography Answer Writing

The document provides feedback on various sections of a report, suggesting improvements in areas such as introductions, conclusions, and the inclusion of relevant examples and points. It emphasizes the need for better organization, such as dividing content into specific categories and adding important details like environmental impacts and recent discoveries. Overall, the feedback highlights the importance of clarity and depth in the content presented.

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UPSC Geography Answer Writing

The document provides feedback on various sections of a report, suggesting improvements in areas such as introductions, conclusions, and the inclusion of relevant examples and points. It emphasizes the need for better organization, such as dividing content into specific categories and adding important details like environmental impacts and recent discoveries. Overall, the feedback highlights the importance of clarity and depth in the content presented.

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Fair

Introduction,
add it
receives
rainfall below
250mm.

Make separate headings like


..
cold desert and hot desert
formation.

Good
map.

correct points.

.
Good
illustration

Relevant
points,
add rain
shadow deserts
due to
leeward
slopes.

.
can divide into
erosional and
depositional forms.

Fig - mushroom rocks.

,
Fair
points ,
add points
like sand
dunes and
loess.

...

Fair conclusion ,
add importance of
the deserts .

6.5
..
Fair Introduction,
but do not
restrict to
himalayas
and western
ghats.

Fair point ,
. elaborate
it .

can draw .
world map
to show
various
mountains.

...

Add example like chorabari lake outburst ,2013.

.
correct
points

..

Good
points ,ca
n add
deforestat
ion
leading to
Pune
landslide
2014.

..

example - chamoli flash floods ,2021.

.
can divide it into national and international level.

Correct
and diverse
points.

..

Fair conclusion can


relate to sustainable
development goal.
6.5

.
Good
introduction.

Fair and
diverse
Points.

..
Can divide it into social , environment and economic impacts .

Correct
points.

..
Relevant and
diverse
points..

Good
Conclusion.

..

7.5
Relevant
introduction.

good map.

Avoid short forms ,


add Argentina,
Bolivia and
chile.

..
Add about the
recent discovery
of lithium in
India in Jammu
and Kashmir.

.
.

Good points ,
As 96% total
production
controlled by
4 countries -
Australia,
Chile, China
and
Argentina.

.
Add it takes nearly 2.2 million litres of water to produce
one ton of lithium.

Correct
points ,
Add points
like pollution
example -
releases 15
tonnes of
carbon
dioxide for
every tonne
of lithium..

..

..

Improve
conclusion ,
add add
suggestions
like supply
chain
resilience.
5.5
.

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