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Revising, Editing, Proofreading and Publishing

This document provides information about revising, editing, and proofreading essays. It discusses the key stages of revising including re-reading content and checking the introduction and conclusion. Editing is described as improving coherence and style. Proofreading involves checking for errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation and more. Checklists for each stage are also included to help the writing process.
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Revising, Editing, Proofreading and Publishing

This document provides information about revising, editing, and proofreading essays. It discusses the key stages of revising including re-reading content and checking the introduction and conclusion. Editing is described as improving coherence and style. Proofreading involves checking for errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation and more. Checklists for each stage are also included to help the writing process.
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LET’S WATCH THIS!
WHAT IS REVISING?
is the very first stage when looking
deeply into the content of your essay.
This involves re-reading your essay,
adding ideas, and changing or even
eliminating ideas that are far from your
main idea.
all sentences should support and explain
you main idea. This stage demands that
you check your introduction and
conclusion.
CHECKLIST FOR REVISING
YOUR ESSAY:
does the essay address a question, a problem, or
an issue?
is the dominant point of view- first, second, third
person appropriate for your purpose and
audience?
is your title interesting and related to the main
idea of your essay?
does your essay have an introduction,
body and conclusion?
does each body paragraph contain a topic
sentence and supporting ideas?
WHAT IS EDITING?
comes after revising, this is where you
improve the craftsmanship of your work
leading to coherence and style.
coherence is the unity of the whole essay
where your group of sentences are related to
your main idea.
your supporting sentences are related to
the main idea of each paragraph.
style is how the writer brings about
his/her writing to fit the context and
audience by choosing the right words and
having sentence fluency.
CHECKLIST FOR EDITING
ESSAY:
is each paragraph sufficiently develop and
coherent?
are there clear, logical transitional markers
between your paragraphs?
is your choice of words appropriate for your
audience? do you repeat words that should be
change for variety?
are your sentences clear and effective that
engage your audience’s attention?
are all your supporting sentences in every
paragraph connected to the topic sentences of
every paragraph?
have you checked for irrelevant sentences in
every paragraph?
WHAT IS
PROOFREADING?
is the last stage after you revise and edit your
essay. This is the stage where you check errors in
the sentence structure, subject-verb agreement,
tense, consistency, spelling, capitalization, and
punctuation.
CHECKLIST FOR
PROOFREADING ESSAY:
does the sentence contains error such as:
fragments
run-on sentences
wrong subject-verb agreement
unclear pronoun-antecedent agreement
CHECKLIST FOR
PROOFREADING ESSAY:
unclear pronoun reference
unnecessary shifting in tenses
faulty parallelism
misplaced and dangling modifiers.
split infinitives
CHECKLIST FOR
PROOFREADING ESSAY:
do you use passive voice most of the time? if
yes, replace it with the active voice.
is your spelling accurate and punctuation
correct?
do you avoid unnecessary abbreviations?
do you correct capitalization for titles,
proper nouns, and beginnings of the
sentences?
do you indent your first sentence in
every paragraph?
WHAT IS PUBLISHING?

is the activity of making information,


literature, music, software and other
content available to the public for sale or
for free.
ACTIVI
TY
A.Rewrite the sentences using correct grammar, spelling, and
punctuation.
 
1.I was desperate to Have this film finished.
2.my gradfather commanded an entire battalion during the war
3.3. It's a truism but 19th-century English prosi is almost all
good.
A. Choose and encircle the answer that is a complete and correctly written sentence.
1. a. Destiny and Kaitlyn takes ballet lessons on Wednesday.
b. When talking about your family, it are wise to be discreet.
c. Earlier he spent 12 years in prison, much of it in solitary confinement.
d. For Janice, revenge were sweetly.
2. a. The mammoth was larger than an elephant.
b. When you do you're homework, omit questions 11, 15 and 19.
c. My dad had to get a permit from the City of Dallas to builds a shed in our backyard.

d. It was very interested listening to the elderly man recount his experiences during the
war
APPLICATION
IDENTIFY THE MISTAKES IN THIS
DOCUMENT. USE THE
PROOFREADING SYMBOLS TO
CORRECT THE MISTAKES.
with the invention of the personal computer and the Internet, a
new age in communications begins. now people could
communicate fastest and more easily than ever before. Writing,
editing, and storing information became quick and easy. It was
no longest necessary to write draft after draft when changes
could be made so easily using a word Processor program.
Messages, could now be sent in no time to anywhere in the
world, without addressing envelopes or licking stamps
Century most early, around the year 1450 a similar revolution in
communications had occurred in Germany. This happened when
Johannes Gutenberg invented the printing press. Gutenberg was not the
first person to use printing to copy a peace of writing. printing was
already being invented in China, where they used clay to printoriental
characters. Small items, such as posters and flyers, were already being
printed in Europe too, using the woodblock method of printing. Books
and other largest works, however, were still being copied by hand. At this
time, books were usually produced only in latin, and only the most
educated people read them. Gutenbergs' printing press was about to
change all of this.
ASSESSME
NT
Answer the following questions:

1. Identify the sentence that uses capitalization correctly.


a. Paul O’Neill and Bono toured Africa
b. Paul o’Niell and Bono toured Africa.
c. Paul O’niell and Bono toured Africa
d. Paul O’Niell and Bono toured Africa
2. Which of the following sentences is punctuated correctly?
a. Happily we all ate, ice cream.
b. Happily we all ate ice cream.
c. Happily, we all ate ice cream.
d. Happily we, all ate ice cream.
3. Which of the following sentences is punctuated correctly?
a. I am meeting Mr. Gordon on Tues at 9:15 A.M.
b. I am meeting Mr Gordon on Tues. at 9:15 A.M.
c. I am meeting Mr. Gordon on Tues at 9:15 A.M.
d. I am meeting Mr. Gordon on Tues. at 9:15 A.M.
4. Identify the correct verb for the blank in the following sentence.
Pete Krebs and his band ____for their tour of Europe later today.
a. Leaves
b. Leave
5. Identify the pronoun for the blank in the following sentence.
Everyone should be able to fix ___ own car.
a. His or her
b. Their
6. Choose the best conjunction to combine this sentence pair.
We can fly to Orlando. We can drive.
a. And
b. But
c. Or
d. Because
7. Identify the correct word for the blank in the following sentence.
Irina made the job look so______
a. Easy
b. Easily
8. Identify the sentence that uses capitalization correctly.
a. We went to Albany, New York to speak to governor Pataki.
b. We went to Albany, new york to speak to governor Pataki.
c. We went to albany, New York to speak to Governor Pataki.
d. We went to Albany, New York to speak to Governor Pataki.
9. Which of the following sentence is a complete sentence?
a. Tuned the guitar.
b. Spoke at a rally.
c. Vic cooked rice.
d. Because the invitation was lost.
10. Which of the following sentences is punctuated correctly?
a. When the sun reflects off the water, it shines in my eyes, too.
b. When the sun reflects off the water it shines in my eyes, too.
c. When the son reflects off the water, it shines in my eyes too.
d. When the sun, reflects off the water, it shines in my eyes, too.
11. Which of the underlined words in the following sentences could be edited without
changing the meaning?
My friend thinks love is a basic and fundamental human need.
a. My
b. Thinks
c. Basic and
d. Human
12. Which of the following sentence uses active voice?
a. It was suggested that we adjourn the meeting.
b. Pedro was told not to worry about making mistakes in his first draft.
c. The champagne for the anniversary party was provided by the restaurant.
d. Terry bough a very thoughtful gift.
13.Identify the correct word for the blank in the following sentence.
His hand was _____ burned.
a. Bad
b. Badly
14.Identify the correct contraction for the blank in the following sentence.
____ Maria have a car?
a. Don’t
b. Doesn’t

15.Which of the following sentences is correctly punctuated?


a. Over the bridge. The wind is stronger.
b. The apple pie tasted good, so we each ordered a second piece.
c. The television show, starred Erik Estrada.
d. Green. My favorite color.

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